Writing Craft

Analysis of writing tools and techniques, when to save cats, when to keep your pants on, and no, not everything is a Hero’s Journey.

Ending Stories with Style

Coco Chanel famously said, “Before you leave the house, look in the mirror and take one thing off.” Meant to curtail over-accessorizing, her fashion advice, a mantra for simplicity and elegance, can, in many ways, be applied to writing. From the sentence level to complete manuscripts, writers are encouraged to strive for concision—replacing a dull string of words with one perfect pearl or an awkward stitching between paragraphs with a seamless transition.…

We’re leaving Hemingway writing trends behind — and that’s a good thing

Modern English writing trends enforce a Hemingway dogma that is far out of step with human experience. Fortunately, we are leaving all that behind. I hope. I think we are. Aren’t we?

All of us amateur writers have heard things like:

  • Don’t use purple prose (and, swear to God, if you rhyme, we’re getting pitchforks)
  • Don’t use too many adverbs (you get one ‘‘-LY’’ token per page)
  • Don’t ever use a big word if a smaller word will do
  • Be concise and be brief and be minimal
  • Cut anything unnecessary

These modern English writing trends result in manicured gardens.…

What I Learned Judging a Flash Fiction Contest

Several judges contributed to the first “Story Street Writers’ contest, the Nightmare on Story Street 100 Word Horror Story Contest.” I was the loudest proponent of the contest and due to my Catholic guilt, I poured myself into the shared task of judging the first two rounds.…